Feedback

From today's class we have been given feedback that our trans media projects don't connect as well as they should.

The Poster:
The tagline needs to tie in with the overall imagery. We could write something along the lines, 'because our animals are suffering because of us.. come together as a community and join our beach clean up where there is no price for enjoyment.' We also need to think about the placement of the extra trash. and the placement and sizing of our type.

The Flyer:

The buoys don't set in with the other pieces, like the poster and website. There become too many metaphors overall so we don't even need to incorporate them. We will need to work on the overall layout. We are now thinking of making flaps that tear open revealing the tips with just numbers on them. The background and type logo work fine as a whole which brings all our trans-media things together.

Now it is just more about the refinement and how we connect everything together.