After finalising our visual character style, we went onto developing our poster compositionally with the other details. At first we wanted to use all three characters but it began to look over crowded. We also tried to incorporate the 'texture' smoke but that didn't fit in with our visual style. We got rid of the crab and starfish to make the seagull the main aspect of the poster. We are still hung up on the tagline for the poster. We have tried to see what works but it's a bot hard. Here are some tag lines we have tried:
- This isn’t natural, clean up the beach.
- We don’t need your stinkin’ trash
- isn’t this what you wanted?
- We have feelings too.
- Your trash is our problem.
- Put litter in it’s real place.
- Keep it classy, Keep it clean
- Keep your bad habits to yourself
- Clean it up, its your dooty
Now the poster looks more like this compositionally. The smoke from the cigarette is more subtle and text may also be overlaid without it being confusing. Still need to keep refining the proportions and now add all the details.
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